Results of a Few Hours on the Road Without My Woman
Posted By Randy on July 27, 2010
Back when we was datin'.
Mrs. LFM and I work as a team in all our endeavours and hence, each of us rarely goes abroad in the land without the other. Well, today was an exception – she had some field work to do with a couple of our dogs while I got to do a fire alarm inspection in Chester. It failed.
Anyway, on the way home this jumped into my head.
He snickered at all the critiques
Espousing black magick techniques
Had won him the hunger
Of one so much younger
When she really just loves fine antiques.
He’s a poet an I didn’t know it!
Well done, but perhaps you should have bolded the “fine”?.
I agree with Val, you should make that change!